Edgar came out of his room to see his parents in the living room, watching tv together. "I thought you two were gone by now?" Edgar asks them, standing in the archway to the hallway. "Oh, the trip is cancelled Mac" his mother answered. "My name is Edgar, not Mac!" Edgar snapped. "Don't talk to your mother like that!" Edgar's father replied. Mac Anderson, Edgar's half-brother, came out of his own room and answered. "Did someone say my name?" Mac said, budging past Edgar. "No hun, it was just another mistake of names" Edgar's mother answered. Mac walked over to the couch and sat beside his mum. Mac and Edgar's parents started talking about the show, completely forgetting about Edgar. Edgar, being used to this, walked back into his room.
Edgar walked past his alarm clock, which read "5:38" and lay down on his bed. He pulled out his phone and texted his friends Jake and Rylan.
"Fam, we have a problem. Party can't b at mine. Can 1 of u host it 2nite?"
He waited less than 20 seconds for both of the, to reply.
"Nah dude can't" and "Sorry man no can do"
Edgar sighed, and put his phone down. He laid down on his bed, trying to think of another place to host the party. Suddenly Mac opened his door and walked through. "Hey bro you need to knock next time, luckily my hands not down my pants!" Edgar shouted. "Woah dude chill! Oh and thanks for the mental image of you beating it, I wasn't planning on sleeping anyway" Mac said in a calming voice, hoping his younger brother would calm down too. "Why are you in my room?" Edgar asked rudely. "Someone's tense. Why did you want mum and dad out of the house tonight? You got some gay boy that wants your ass fag?" Mac grinned. "No, asshole!, I wanted to throw a party at mine, bring the guys and-" "oh I know why you want to bring the guys" Mac interrupted and grinned harder. "Fuck off, but it doesn't matter because I now have no where to host the party" Edgar said. "Dude just throw it at Woodland Creek!" Mac suggested. "Woodland Creek? The place a bunch of kids were SLAUGHTERED LIKE PIGS?" Edgar said in fear. "Yeah, that was like 5-6 years ago. Me and some mates go and smoke dope there at the docks. All the doors are unlocked, that's like a secret place to go if you run away or become homeless" Mac explained. "You seriously think I can throw a party there, like, actual I'm starting to get desperate" Edgar asked. "Yeah of course, it's like the best place in town" Mac said. "But it's not in town, it's in the outskirts like a 5 minute drive of a dirt road from the highway to the camping cabins" Edgar explained. "Yeah I kinda know that, I do there at least once a week, also a good place to take some chick alone and-" "I don't wanna hear your detailed scoring" Edgar said. "Whatever man, I'll let you use my generator for power, that place has a couple outlets in each cabin that still functions and some in the mess hall" Mac offered. "Thanks" Edgar said and Mac walked out of his room.
Edgar took out his phone and messaged Rylan and Jake again.
"Hey fam, got a new idea. I'm throwing it at Woodland Creek. Invite some people but I don't want more than 20. Starts @ 8 and it's all night long"...
SCENE 2
Rylan's Car- 5:45pm
Rylan and Jake were in Rylan's car, parked outside Jake's place. "So what did you want to tell me bro?" Jake asked from the shotgun seat, arms crossed. Rylan, in the driver's seat, hands on the steering wheel of the parked car, sighs and drops his arms to his lap. "Remember when I told you I was gay, and you were completely fine about it?" Rylan asked Jake. "Uh, yeah?" Jake answered, not knowing where this conversation is going. "I kinda wanna tell you another secret, but it's not about me" Rylan said softly, it's clear there's anxiety in his voice, an emotion only Jake ever sees from the wealthy and popular Rylan O'Connor. "I think I like Madison, but I also think Madison isn't a girl. I think Madison is trans, bro" Rylan revealed. Jake looked out through the windscreen, the sun was starting to go down, the was turning orange from Jake's eyes. "I'm trying to support you bro, but I don't think Madison is trans, you could be mostly gay and a little straight, sexuality orientation isn't boxes, it's a spectrum and everyone is on it" Jake explained. "I'm not bi, I like dick, if I was bi I would of knocked Elizabeth up like 20 times by now, you don't get how it feels to be in the minority" Rylan said hurtfully. "I'm black" Jake stated. "Oh, right.... Pepsi?" Rylan asked awkwardly, tapping his fingers on a cold Pepsi from a cup holder. "Really? Going all Kendall Jenner on me now? This chat has been interesting, you should invite Elizabeth and her sheep tonight, also Madison" Jake said, changing the subject and got out of the car. "Will do" Rylan said, lowkey hurt that Jake didn't believe him. Jake walked around the side and knocked on Rylan's door. Rylan opened the car door. "Oh and I do want that Pepsi thanks" Jake said, leaning in to grab the Pepsi. Rylan couldn't help staring at Jake's butt. "Nice ass you got there" Rylan grinned, jokingly. Jake laughed and wiggled his butt as he grabbed the Pepsi and closing the door. "Bye dickhead, see you there tonight" Jake said and walked to his house. Rylan smiled, thinking of his bromance with Jake and started the car before driving off.
SCENE 3
Mason's House- 5:50pm
Mason looked in the mirror, his new haircut is shorter than it once was. Most people would just expect he's doing a Katy Perry or Halsey. "I am beautiful. I am strong. I am..." Mason began and started to have tears in his eyes. "I am beautiful. I am strong. I am...". A tear rolled down his eye and his phone rang from the top of the draw. He looked at it. It read "Nick". He stared at the phone for a second before sniffing and wiping his teary eyes with one hand grabbing the phone with the other. He exhaled to calm himself and then pressed "Answer".
"Hey Madds, did you get to finish the Nightmare on Elm Street movies?" Nick asked excitedly.
"Oh, uh, no sorry. I've kinda been busy" Mason said, a tone in his voice is guilt.
"...okay, did you watch any of them then?" Nick asked. "I could come over and watch them with you?".
Mason sighed and felt guilty. "No sorry, I haven't watched any and I can't watch them tonight" Mason answered honestly.
There was a pause before Nick answered. "Did I do something wrong, Madds. I mean, the past couple of months, we've hung out less and less. Do you still wanna be my friend?" Nick asked, sharing his thoughts.
"No Nick, it's me. I've just been busy and stuff. I swear to god it's not you, but tonight I can't because I was invited to a party by Rylan" Mason revealed.
"A party? Can I come? Make sure you do anything regrettable" Nick asked.
"Yeah, I'd like you to come, make sure everything goes well. This can be an I'm sorry for not watching any Elm street movies"
"YOU DIDN'T WATCH ANY?" Nick yelled, not angry, Mason could tell the jokingly yet disappointed tone in his voice.
"Come to mine at 7:30, the party starts at 8" Mason said, changing the subject.
"Goodbye" Nick said, a hint of disappointment in his voice. Nick ends the call.
Mason puts the phone down and stares back into the mirror. Mason took a long, deep breath.
"I am beautiful. I am strong. I. Am.... Mason"
SCENE 4
Jake's House- 5:51pm
Jake was sitting in his living room, on his phone on Facebook. His brother sat beside him. "What are you doing?" his nosey brother asked. "Nothing" Jake said, eyes glued to his phone. "Wow you're boring!" his brother said and stood up. "Oh and by the way mum found a condom wrapper in your room, so I'd be on your best behaviour if I were you" he said and walked off. Jake froze. His mind went to two nights ago with his girlfriend Jessica. He ignored it and just thought his brother was making up lies so he texted his distant friend from back in the day, Tobias.
"Hey Tobias, haven't seen you in a while. I need the hookup for 50gram of weed and coke, how much is that altogether?". He sent the text. Not even a minute later and Tobias had replied.
"What's the hookup for?". Jake tapped his finger on the side of his phone, contemplating whether he should tell the truth or not. "For a party" Jake responded. "Can I come if I bring the drugs, free of charge, got a bong too" Tobias said. Jake smiled when he read the text. "Yeah dude sounds like a deal, it's at Woodland Creek at 8ish". Jake sent the text
Jake was worried about the condom wrapper and called Jess, he looked at the time, 5:56pm.
SCENE 5
Tessa's House- 5:56pm
Tessa and her friends Jessica and Fantasia were sitting on Tessa's bed. "Are we doing anything tonight, so you think you'll be allowed out all night?" Jessica asked Fantasia. "Yeah, shocking I am. I think maybe because I did well on that last test, but, they finally let me have a sleepover!" Fantasia said with joy. "Wait hold up, have you EVER had a sleepover before?" Tessa asked. "...um.....no?" Fantasia answered shyly. "Holy sh-" Tessa said, but was interrupted by a phone call. It was from Jessica's phone. Jessica picked her phone up, the caller ID was from her boyfriend, Jake.
"Hey babe" Jessica said
"Hey Jess you sexy babe, I was just calling about two nights ago at mine-"
Jessica's eyes widened in panic.
"Sorry for interrupting babe, but uh, I'm sitting right beside Tessa and Asia"
"Hi!" Tessa and Asia said together
Jake laughed from the other line. "Sorry babe, another reason I wanna called is because there's this party at Woodland Creek that starts at 8, you wanna come?" Fantasia and Tessa can come too if they want" Jake proposed.
Tessa gets a text from her crush, Edgar.
"Hey Tessa. Party @ Woodland Creek. Wanna come?"
Tessa read the text. "Hey I just got invited by Edgar too" she announced. "We should totally go!" Jessica said. "Are you sure about this?" Fantasia asked. "I'm going, come on Asia it'll be so fun!" Tessa added. Fantasia sighed. "Yeah, okay I'll go" Asia said, sadness in her voice. Tessa and Jessica were very happy, whereas Fantasia just wanted to read. "We are gonna get changed, talk to you later babe" Jessica said and hung up. "Okay let's do this, I think mum's got a couple shots that I can, uh borrow" Tessa said. Jessica laughed while Fantasia felt out of place. If only she knew what Tessa and Jessica had brought her into...
SCENE 6
Highway- 8:02pm
The three girls were in Fantasia's car, Fantasia was the driver, Tessa in shotgun and Jessica was in the back. "I never thought I'd be back here" Jessica stated, talking about Woodland Creek. "Did you use to go there?" Fantasia asked, eyes on the road. "Yeah as a kid I went there for a couple of years, that's actually where I met Jake as a kid, how did you not know this?" Jessica asked, confused. "I mean I heard of the murders here but I didn't know you went to Woodland Creek while it was open" Tessa said, agreeing with Fantasia. "Well I guess you never asked about it before" Jessica answered, a little sass in her voice. Fantasia and Tessa both brushed it off.
Soon they went on the turn off and down a dirt road, driving deeper into a forest. 10 minutes later, they had arrived at Woodland Creek. There were four cars already parked, so they parked in line with the other cars. They could hear music coming from the three cabins which was about 50m away from them. The bathrooms were in between the Mess Hall and the three cabins. "Eagle" cabin, "Bear cabin, and "Rattlesnake" cabin, although "Rattlesnake" cabin looked a lot more damaged than the other two, making it very creepy. "I don't like the look of this" Fantasia said, looking at Rattlesnake cabin as she walks towards the cabins. "We'll be fine, it's in Eagle cabin, that was the one I always slept in" Jessica said. "Asia I can't believe you didn't change!" Tessa said, looking at Fantasia's outfit, consisting of a light pink sweater, white jeans and white sneakers. "So? I can't wear whatever I want. You can wear less clothing than usual to impress some guys but I just wanna experience a party, we don't live forever" Fantasia said in defence. Jake walked outside, looking high as a kite. He saw Jessica and his face lit up, as if he was somehow feeling lonely beforehand. "Jess babe!" Jake said and ran to Jessica, kissing her. "We are gonna go inside, see you two in a bit" Tessa said and linked arms with Fantasia and the pair walked inside.
SCENE 7
Tessa and Fantasia walk inside Eagle cabin. "DNA" by Kendrick Lamar is playing, Elizabeth and Reese are dancing with Edgar and Rylan. Tobias and Cordelia are making out on a bunk bed, getting very hands on. Mason and Nick are on a couch, talking. "Hey everyone! Tessa, Jessica and Fantasia are here!" Edgar said and walked over. Elizabeth and Reese looked over, Tessa noticed Elizabeth rolling her eyes. Tessa's heart skipped a beat when Edgar stood beside her. "You three are the last ones here, twelve people altogether" Edgar observed. "Where's Jessica actually?" Edgar asked. "Oh she's outside with Jake" Tessa said, and looked out the window, Jake was having a smoke, doing 22's (two puffs then pass to other person) with Jessica.
Reese also saw Jake with Jessica, and got angry. She didn't want some reject twilight girl to have the hot Jake Davison. "I'll be back" Reese said to Elizabeth, who was trying to get into Rylan, who wanted to get into Mason. Reese walked past Tessa. "She's trouble" Edgar said to Tessa. "I'd call her something like a stuck up bitch, you know, something along the lines of that" Tessa said, making Edgar laugh. Tessa smiled and stood closer to Edgar, making it clear what she wanted. "uh, Tessa" Edgar said. "Yeah?" Tessa said, starting to act flirtatious. "I'm gay" Edgar said. Tessa's flirty mood disappeared very quickly. "Oh my god I'm so so so so sorry!" Tessa said and backed away. "Tessa it's okay it's not your fault" Edgar said. "I feel like an idiot" Tessa said, feeling ashamed. "Don't be, it's actually kinda flattering" Edgar said, trying to lighten the mood. "I-I gotta go" Tessa said, and walked past Nick and Fantasia who were bonding, talking about not usually going to parties and horror movies, and walked outside, and saw Reese and Jessica fighting.
The song changed to "Mess Around" by Cage The Elephant. Reese was lying face down in dirt with Jessica kneeing her in the back and twisting one of Reese's arms. "You fucking bitch!" Jessica said and twisted it harder. Reese screamed loudly, alerting everyone. Suddenly the generator behind Eagle cabin goes out and the power along with it. "He's mine!" Reese said and kicked Jessica in the guts and Jessica lets go. "Argh! Fucking skank" Jessica said and starts choking Reese. "HEY HEY HEY STOP JESS!" Jake said and picked up Jess. Reese lay on the ground, getting her breath back. "Let me get at her!" Jessica yells. "Babe stop, she's a bitch for doing that but it's over, leave her alone, you won" Jake said and stared into Jessica's eyes. "Breathe" Jake said calmly.
Tessa walked away from the drama to go fix the generator. She walks towards the generator, it's been manually turned off. "What the fuck, everyone's over there, who did this?" Tessa asked and pressed the button on, and walked back. Unfortunately she didn't notice the figure over by the cars, holding an axe.
Tessa goes around the cabin to the front and everyone's gone inside. She opens it to see Elizabeth calming Reese down and Nick and Fantasia calming Jessica down.
Mason turns the music off, and everyone's annoyed at him. Nick and Rylan look over at Mason. "Can I have your attention everyone" Mason yelled. Everyone slowly becomes quiet. "This is hard to say, but what I wanna say is" Mason starts. Mason takes a deep breath, and then notices the door wide open. Tessa also looks at the open door, and starts to figure out what's about to happen. The generator, the wide open door, she knew something was wrong. Out of nowhere, an axe, flung from outside, hits Jake in the back of the head. Jake falls to the ground and everyone starts screaming.
END OF EPISODE
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Questions-
Favourite scene?
Favourite characters?
Least favourite characters?
Anything your confused on?
Who will die next?
Who is the killer?
Who will survive?
Favourite scene? Jessica beating Reese for just attacking her or jakes death which surprised me alot.
Favourite characters? Jessica, Edgar, Mason and Tessa
Least favourite characters? Reese
Anything your confused on? Not really
Who will die next? Reese I hope but I think Cordelia
Who is the killer? Nick?
Who will survive? Edgar, Mason and maybe Fantasia?
Favourite scene? Ohhh Scene 7 especially the fight between Reese and Jessica then the awkward situation between Edgar and Tessa and the intense part where I thought Tessa was going to die eek!
Favourite characters? Mason, Rylan, Edgar, Jessica, and Tessa a lil bit
Least favourite characters? Reese and Mac even though he's hardly a character LMFAO
Anything your confused on? Tessa had no trouble with flirting with Edgar even though she's quite pessimistic about boys, did you change her up? I don't mind if you did :)
Who will die next? Cordelia or Tobias for sure
Who is the killer? Well everyone seemed to have been in the room when it happened, so uhhh... idk. But it seems like Mason atm, I think Mason might actually be the killer
Who will survive? I would say Tessa cause I put her as Final Girl or Athletic but I don't know what you put her as, so I see a twist and he dying and maybe someone else surviving idk!
Favourite scene? The cat fight
Favourite characters? Mason, Tobias & Reese
Least favourite characters? Jake
Anything your confused on? Idek
Who will die next? Jessica (PLS)
Who is the killer? Tobias
Who will survive? Mason & Reese
Favourite scene?: Scene 2 which showcases Jake and Rylan's bromance, it is honestly absolutely fucking adorable.
Favourite characters?: Rylan, Mason, Nick, Jake.
Least favourite characters?: Reese and Cordelia.
Anything your confused on?: Not to my knowledge.
Who will die next?: Reese, pretty please!
Who is the killer?: Nick
Who will survive?: Mason and Rylan.
Favourite scene? When Tessa went to check on the generator, and she missed the person holding an axe, very cool and well done.
Favourite characters? Not sure yet.
Least favourite characters? Do not know.
Anything your confused on? Yes, this is just honest but I am confused on why Edgar tells Tessa that he is gay, because I thought he is trying so hard to hide that he is gay and transgender? Also I was kind of confused because I feel that there needs to be more stornger character development. For example I don't really even get to know Reese, Elizabeth, Cordelia, and Tobias. Especially Cordelia, I do not think she even said a word. I mean I love this series but I just honestly feel it needs more character development.
Who will die next? No clue.
Who is the killer? Edgar for sure. He kills Jake off just because hes mad at him making fun that he is gay.
Who will survive? Mason because Edgar will save Mason for last as they are both transgender.
josiahsurvivor Thank you for your opinion and feedback. Edgar is gay, Mason is the one who is transgender. That's why before Jake's death, he gets everyone's attention, because he is about to come out to everyone as trans, something his crush Rylan figured out beforehand.
josiahsurvivor Also I try to give the majority of the cast some development each episode, for the first few episodes some people each episode miss out on the character development, but everyone does have their own struggles and storyline, but I will try harder next episode.
Macda27 You still wrote this very well, don't get me wrong. I didn't see anything really wrong. Like in some shows, some people aren't really shown whilst others are the "stars". However, they do get their episode of light, although mostly something bad happens.
Favourite characters? Jessica, Edgar, Mason and Tessa
Least favourite characters? Reese
Anything your confused on? Not really
Who will die next? Reese I hope but I think Cordelia
Who is the killer? Nick?
Who will survive? Edgar, Mason and maybe Fantasia?