So me and my girlfriend made a short little film. It's supposed to be funny :) I've been waiting to show you guys for a few weeks but she just never posted it to youtube till now since she was moving into college. Anyway i hope you guys like it. It was really fun to make :)
The film quality is really nice, you projection is good, the girl is actually a pretty good actor, the jokes were kinda cheesy and lame to me (but that's the issues with comedies), I can't really comment on your facial expressions since i'm assuming you kept that face going for comedic effect but good use of body movement.
B- for creativity
C for comedic value
A for execution
