As I'm bored I've decided I'm going to blog my script plans from work :D
Just for oppinions etc.....
Scene 1
It's normal times at the Jones family. Chris Jones walks out of the house without saying a word of goodbye with a filled up black bag. Jan Jones walks downstairs and becomes suspicious of Chris. Simon and Jen (Chris and Jans children) discuss possibilities of what could be going on. Nick is just 5 years old at this time. Chris comes home the next morning and Jan instantly confronts him with where he has been. Chris explains that he has been paying back the loan sharks threatening the family part sums, this results in Simon and Jen overhearing what he has done and Jan storming out of the house.
Remember, there is still work to be done :) This is just the rough plan.