Neferti-
http://i.imgur.com/3TcMTHb.png S: I like the idea that you were going for, I love that you added tears I think that sold the look but I do see some problematic areas like that scar on her face I thought it was a cigar at first and that scratch on her arm it should've torn that side of her dress too and speaking of the dress I would've loved it if you went over the top glam since you are projecting a Hollywood star it would've been a great contrast with the gruesomeness.
A: I quite liked this, and surprisingly its one of my favorite looks of yours so far. The story was a cute touch and choosing to play an actual character was a good choice in my opinion instead of going the very obvious gorey direction. Props!
G: I don't like this it's too obvious for me so I'd expect more
B: My oats are transcending……… I am new. This has changed my life FOREVER, you changed drag FOREVER. You shit on my whole life bitch how dare you!!!