Ok! Let me just preface that I think you girls killed it this week. But let's start with critiques

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JOAN
This is one of my favorite Linda shoots ever, so right off the bat you are off the great start. The cocked shoulder, the intense gaze, texture of the sheer fabric, it all works together wonderfully! The (very textured) powdered wig does date the image slightly, but you did an amazing job this week.

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AIDAN
I think the outfit in this image looks great. I also think the environment compliments it, cementing that this is supposed to be a modern streetwear look. However, I can kind of tell that that wasn’t entirely the intention because this is definitely a shot before a fashion show more than an actual editorial or photoshoot y’know? However, in the same vein, the too-cool-to-pose also works for this outfit, so you sort of cap out around even.

hi

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KIM-ANN
This is a very pretty shot, but it’s quite safe. The vintage outfit is great, the styling is well done. The pose is definitely interesting and memorable. Overall, not really any bad critiques, but I think in the future it would benefit you to think a little more outside the box.

YAS

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STE’VONNE
This is a great shot! For one, I love that your body is not swallowed up here, and that there is a very clearly defined shape. The facial expressions give me this sultry yet innocent vibe, like vixen trying to lure you in. The cream color of her skin and the green submerged hair really flourishes the shot.

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DANI
Great gowns. Beautiful gowns. From a photography standpoint, it’s a great shot. The ocean is beautiful, the dress looks great. I think the issue with this photo is it is TOO posed. It kind of looks like someone who doesn’t typically model was doing the shot and went for the most generic pose they can think of. I think you were going in the right direction but this just feels a little shallow.

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SUSIE BETH ANN
I’m just a bit bored with this shot. Among all the others this week, this one is not memorable at all. The garment has good motion to it, but I think it's very matronly with that bland top and visible pantyliner. The pose is also very weird. The eyes are very dead; the hands, awkward. You could have done better this week.