Alright, well, even though i barely made it past the tic in my last blog, i got thirty on my first one, so i'll do this one, and whoever votes, pease help with character name, or i'll give him one, lol. he'll have one by next blog no matter what, and i need 15 points if yall want me to make next one, or just more points for other two, well, here it is..
Chapter 1: (continued...)
.. grab my hammer and try to swing, but the man hits my eye. I, accidently, drop my hammer. It flys away from us. I wrestle with the guy,and get him off. Luckily, I have enough time to get to the hammer and i pick it up. THUD! The man throws a ball and hits me right upside the cheek.
"Ugh!" I say as i feel the red cheek. I look around my shoulder and see the man with a bat. He's holding it in a swinging position.
"Come on, Big Boy!" He yells at me, apparently motioning for me to make the first move. I raise my hammer. I look and see the other two men.
"You really want this,i mean, I did already take out your friends...?" I ask him. I'm already hurt, enough. I expected to be able to catch them in nets, or have them surrender, or at least see a comic strip above me, saying, WHAM! Or something like that.
"Oh, them? Oh, they were noobs, kid, you couldn't tell?" He starts to laugh. "HAHAHA! You actually thought it would be easy, you're so stupid, even I just started this!"
"Ummm" I can't let him know the truth, he needs to think i'm used to this... " You mean you were started already? Man, your boss must suck."
"Well, that's a lie I can tell by the look on your face, jeez, you need to be better at lying to live here!"
"No, everybody who lies is corrupt."
"Kid, this whole place is corrupted, ha, what, did you plan on changing it! MORON!" He yells. he charges.
*Flashback.*
I'm looking up at my dad. He's getting ready to open the door or something, but I hurry and open it for him.
"You think this'll change anything between us, MORON!" He tells me as he leaves. My Dad always called me a liar, he hated me.
*Flashback.*
"Nobody... calls... me...," The man stops. I look at my feet, and raise the hammer. "a...," He starts backing away as he looks up above me. He looks like he's about to run, wait, how am I seeing him if i'm watching my shoes... "MORON!!!" I yell. I throw the hammer at him, and go in shock. Some red, misty force surrounds my hand, and travels with the hammer. I Watch as the man gets hit with the hammer. Before he gets hit, he throws a knife. He gets hit with the hammer, he explodes! Blood goes everywhere.... THUD! I look down and see the knife stuck in me, then, the red mist pulls in out, and covers the whole... I run, grab my hammer, and head home, in bewilderment. I close my door and hit the couch. I don't have enough energy to think about the red mist around my body... but what I do think, is... This fighting is going to be tougher then I thought...
There you have it... the first chapter, And i need 15 points to do another. What will happen to this Ryan Strongsfeld. Will he be able to save the city... Or fail? Will this Red Mist prove to be his ally/friend, or will it prove to be his destruction? Find out, next time!!!
