hello. i'm gonna write a super hero story for you guys, if this gets five points, ill write the second part, here it is..................
INTRODUCTION
The Streets were filled with criminals, all the people were scared into there homes. Ever since the mayor had proved to be corrupted, everything changed. He let all prisoners out of the jail, killed off all cops, and if anyone got in his way, they would be "Gone". Yeah, a couple people have tried to take the mayor out, but none have succeeded. I live alone in my apartment. My parents had been killed years ago when i was sleeping, a gang had busted down the door and killed them both. When I woke up, there bodies were there, staring at me, i cried for hours.
Luckily, my dad taught me how to create locks, so i was able to protect myself. This gang, The Smugglers, had been helping out all of us people that aren't criminals, by delivering food and water, every other day. They were risking their lives for us, but we needed it. They've been attacked a couple times, but they haven't quit. But You get tired of living in captivity, you know. It really gets to you. I miss seeing children out in the park, playing, laughing, cheering; i miss the sunlight, shine into my eyes in the mornings. God, it's been so long since I've seen the sun, since I've seen other people, since I've heard other people. There's no electricity, which means no T.V; I've lived off of imagination, ha ha. But seriously, I miss it all.
I'm ready for somebody to stop it, to fight the system, to take a stand for everybody too scared to. Somebody needs to take a stand and end this reign of terror. This was way worse then The Great Depression and The Holocaust. If nobody else will do it, then i will. I'll be the Hero, yeah! All though I have no powers, i can be like that Kick- Ass guy. I can use a hammer,ha ha. I will start a whole revolution, i'll fight off the people in my neighbor hood, first, then other neighborhoods, maybe get followers, too. Then, we will attack the mayor. This my story.... This is my.. Revolution.
Remember, five points and i'll continue it. And comment ideaS FOR A Superhero name, or side kick, or even ideas for the story, alone, see ya next time,guys and girls
