Alright, i got eleven points,now. This time, i wanna get 10 points at least, and at least two votes. this is the second part to my story... so i still need a superhero name, guys!!!
Chapter 1: A new revolution
I had already had it in my mind. I was gonna save everybody. Me, Ryan strongsfeld, was gonna save the hood. I needed a costume, so I need to think. I don't really have any clothes except for my Red Jacket, black jeans, and my Red Converse, so i guess that'll be my costume. I'm not wearing any tights, i'm not gonna be no gay superhero! I've got to create a mask, wait, i don't have any family or anybody to get hurt, i'll just keep my costume without the mask. It'll be easy to find a fight... but i need a weapon... My Dads hammer! I hurry and grab my hammer out of the toolbox.
Now that i've got my weapon, i guess i'm heading out.
OUTSIDE.........
I look around for a fight, and there it is.... In the alley way! I throw my wallet and see three men run towards it. they begin fighting until they notice me.
"How old are you,kid?" One asks.
"seven-teen." I state,
"That's old enough!" Another says. He throws the wallet at me and charges.
"Okay... this outta be easy, just gotta stretch, i should probably tell this guy to wait." i think to myself. "Hey, can you wait!" I yell.
"What?!?" He says. The three of them stop. i begin stretching.
"What are you doing?" One other asks.
"Umm, warming up." I explain.
"You watch to much T.V, kid." The other says.He pulls out a knife.
"Whoe, what's that for?" I ask.
"Oh, i'm just carving something for Christmas!" He yells as he runs towards me. Holy crap! this guys gonna kill me,this ain't what I thought it would be.
"Listen, i think i'm out!" i yell.
"Nope, you dead now!" he yells. he tackles at me. I hurry and pull at my hammer! WHAM! He gets knocked off his feet and falls to the ground. "OWW!"he yells. I look down and see the knife in his shoulder.
"You son of a bi-" the other runs at me.
"Okay, i gotta do this?" i think to myself. I ready my hammer and swing, WHAM! His head swings to the side. He catches himself with his hand and stands back up. The other guy runs at me. He tackles me to the ground before i can hit him. I...
That was the second part to my story. 10 points and i'll keep writting. See ya'll then.
