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JOAN
There are a lot of components of this that I love. Starting you with, you look absolutely amazing. You are not being upstaged by any of your fellow co-models. You’re posing very tactly to hide anything too salacious, but also not in a way that your body looks too weird. I’m a big fan of the upward gaze, as it elongates your neck and allows the light to really hit your features. I also think the halos are done nicely and don’t look too corny. I guess I have two things I’m eh on and they are more editing: I wish there was more greenery on the upper half of the photo, and there is a bit of a motion blur on this photo, but in terms of modeling, you did well.