I need help!!
I entered a contest trying to win a complete braces treatment for my mother. Is there anything I should add or change to tip the favors in my directions? I really wanna min :/
Raised by a single Mother because of an early death of her beloved father, my Mom has always had less opportunities in life. However, against all odds, as a young optimistic lady, she decided to go study at University of Moncton and obtained a well deserved masters degrees. Even though she had to overcome multiple barriers in her life, she always seems to push trough these very thick walls.
Sadly, my Mom did not have any opportunities to get special treatments as a child. As confident as my mother is, braces would completely change her life. She has been to me and my brother a mother that we could not ask better for. She always put others before herself, which is a quality that from my point of view, is one of the best quality someone could acquire. Now that I am 18, I would LOVE to have the chance to thank my mother with all my heart for everything she did for me., I would now like to give back by following her examples. I imagine the smile my mother would have on her glowing face when I would announce that she won a complete orthodontic treatment from docbraces. A smile that I dearly love to see, but could surely need some help.
I love you mom xoxo
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early death of her beloved father....you mean her husband???? isn't that your father lmao
Raised by a single mother due to the early and untimely death of her beloved father, my mom has always had less chance for opportunities in life. However, she decided to go and study at the University of Moncton and, although facing adversity, she obtained a well deserved masters degree, against all odds.
Graduating as an optimistic young woman, she has always seemed to overcome the multiple barriers that life has presented her with.
Sadly, my mom did not have any chance to get special treatments as a child, namely orthodontic work. Although my mother is strong and confident, I believe that braces would completely change her life. She has been the most amazing mother that me and my brother could ever ask for. She always puts others before herself, prioritizing the needs of others, instead of her own. Now that I am 18, I would LOVE to have the chance to thank my mother with all my heart for everything she has done, and is still doing, for me. I would like to follow her example of giving. I can only imagine the smile my mother would have on her glowing face when I announce that she has won a complete orthodontic treatment from docbraces. A smile that I dearly love to see, but could surely need some help.
