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Big Brother and online Hunger games.

Does this sounds like a good story?

Aug 27, 2013 by ChelseaKween
Victoria Everett is a typical 15 year old girl in 2050. Her biggest concerns are new cars and the latest trends. Untill, that is, the government announces that the world is heating and the only way to save the human race is to select people to be locked away untill the earth is habitable again. Victoria is one of the lucky chosen, along with her best friend, Stephanie, her crush, Jacob. She soon meets many other chosen people, Kara, a girl with a troubled past looking for a new future, Angelica, a young girl who isn't ready to move on and Reynold, the oldest of the areas chosen and a leader figure amongst them. When they finally step into the cryo-pods, they emerge to a changed earth, scarred with remnants of human civilization and crawling with more evolved wildlife. Victoria has seen a lot, but this is a whole new adventure.

Comments

sounds really good
Sent by blatastic1234,Aug 27, 2013
Wow,. Write a fucking book please.
Sent by RaverKid,Aug 27, 2013
Not really
Sent by HighNoon,Aug 27, 2013
Fix your tenses.
Sent by Loopulle,Aug 27, 2013
loopulle Where?
Sent by ChelseaKween,Aug 27, 2013
Your tensing sounds weird. Try using past tense instead, at least at the start.

ChelseaKween
Sent by Loopulle,Aug 28, 2013

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