JERARD’S “DETERMINATION” COMMENTS
Sheena - Right on! There you go Sheena, you definitely are one of the most clever when it comes to explaining your shots and it comes on your full advantage. This shot is what would make you stands out from everyone else. That jawline there was in perfection, you are selling each garment you wore and that facial expression is the endgame.
Hao - That red colored suit, definitely a winner! You sold that suit from head to toe, I was a little bothered with the facial expression, too forced, maybe the weight your hand has been carrying, but other than that, the body positioning was really a smart choice on showcasing even the chair, great job!
Taylor - Again red is definitely the winner's color, unlike Hao's shot your facial expression conveys something different, it speaks innocence, youth, carefree. Now, I do wish you could have executed that confidence in your eyes, and maybe showed the full body picture, but basing on what you had, it was a wonderful job.
Garrett - A nice way to convey a message, walking through that hill or mountain. Although I must say you took on the easier route with this regard, because I think you could have smartly moved on different path. Now, based on what you have presented the expression showcases resiliency and not giving up attitude, and the color palette on this shot was also aesthetically pleasing.