Does it still have to be only 200 words?

Yes. I don't want a novel. I hope to have a lot to read. If enough people are limited, I will extend it a little more.

By that I mean number of words

I enjoyed writing it. But not cutting stuff out

I only got part of the first line. T~T

I havce only to submissions.

JD, I gave you a score of 46/50

Riley gave you  47/50

That means you scored a total of 93/100

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A 46 FROM MYSELF

AND A 45 FROM RILEY.

YOU SCORED 91/100,

JD YOU WON IMMUNITY!!

aww glad you liked my play <3 its actually very comedic but I do have a grandmother I love dearly. she passed away in 2005. And no I am not pulling a fairplay lmao

I will keep her dentures on my mantel forever

GIMME MY MONEY
I did the judging now where is my paycheck?

hahaha yeeeeessssss Yinzer!

JD's play:

Background:
J.D was casted once again on Yinzers survivor series Season 3: Congo
J.D has battled the elements as well as the other players. He misses his grandmother who he left behind at home on the farm. “She’s my rock” J.D. implies.
Yinzer: Today I have a little something to show you. Something you’ve all been craving
Me2: Icecream!
J.D. : oh no oh god no Yinzer
Yinzer: J.D. guess who is here to see you.
J.D.  collapses to the ground. And starts to cry.
Yinzer: Your grandmother Dede!
J.D.: Meemah!!!!
Jumps in grandmothers arms.
Grandmother:  Lordy lordy JD you stink!
Drops me on the ground.
Grandmother: And you haven’t won yet? Jesus what have you been doing in this game JD!
J.D (Sadly): I’ve been trying my best meemah
Grandmother: F**K right you have.
Grandmother punches Gregory
JD: Meemah no!! Don’t do that!
Yinzer: Way to go Grandma D!
Cast looks odd at Yinzer
Yinzer: I mean Dede do not touch the other players please
Grandma: I don’t give a crap. Lets get on with this challenge! I’m ready!!!
Starts running in place and loses teeth.
JD: Grandma your embarrassing me!
Buries head in sand

JD's grandma gave me a black eye. ;( DISQUALIFY (:P)

Still think mine was better it had a picture