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  1. Anyone got current CBBUK links or smth?
  2. Yoo where can I watch CBBUK
  3. Lol I need a tie breaker :P
  4. Which season of RPDR
  5. Who won hoh?
  6. Lmao I haven't played fastings in 2 years
  7. THOUGHTS ON KATYA DESIGNS???
  8. KATYA ZAMOLODCHIKOVA
  9. Whats a good Endurance
  10. F5 is the last day for castings
  11. So I made my first design last night
  12. What do
  13. What was that weird
  14. What the actual fuck
  15. Courtney Act
  16. Question
  17. Just because of that
  18. Yoo what season of RPDR should I watch?
  19. Does anyone have a non-tengaged
  20. When do noms drop to only 2 in castings?
  21. Okay so I haven't played rookies in legit over two..
  22. WHAT THE FUCK NO
  23. Okay what the hell
  24. Lmao how long have Jeff and Jordyn
  25. Ahh yess! (Spoiler)
  26. Yoo link for free live feeds?
  27. Bet, bet, bet!
  28. That awkward moment when
  29. I love when people
  30. Guitar Practice link?
  31. Is this an appropriate way to end my Common App..
  32. Wait did Becky
  33. It's a tough decision between watching
  34. Omfg Jason
  35. Has anything BIG happened since
  36. Who won BOB?
  37. Anyone know of/ go to
  38. This segment with Michelle Rodriguez
  39. Okaaay
  40. Omgg

Is this an appropriate way to end my Common App essay?

Aug 7, 2015 by posiedonrox
"I hope that whoever reads this short spiel is able to find the insight into me that they are looking for, thank you."

Comments

What are you thanking them for?
Sent by Heath,Aug 7, 2015
Having a comma splice right at the end will leave a bad last impression.

Same with ending a sentence with a preposition. @_@
Sent by Loopulle,Aug 7, 2015
I have a terrible addiction with comma splices, loopulle . Like it's teetering on unhealthy.
Sent by posiedonrox,Aug 7, 2015
True... Should I change it to "thank you for your time"? heath
Sent by posiedonrox,Aug 7, 2015

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