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Big Brother and online Hunger games.

my poetry

Jan 3, 2009 by corinnescott27
imageHell

She jumps off the boat,
Straight into hell,
She's committed a great sin,
cant you tell,
Flames all around her,
Maybe she fell,
Off the side of the boat,
Straight into hell.

Comments

LOL! plus!
Sent by drubert,Jan 3, 2009
hold on is this a serious poem?
Sent by drubert,Jan 3, 2009
plus!
Sent by Richpaca,Jan 3, 2009
Drubert, your a pig.
Sent by Nutmeg,Jan 3, 2009
why? :S
Sent by drubert,Jan 3, 2009
Nice poem, corinne!
 
And LOL, drubert! Do you check every blog you've posted on periodicly?
Sent by PopBelly,Jan 4, 2009
was a poem i wroote for an online poetry competition a few years ago you were to look at a picture and write a poem around it and this is what i came up with thanks everyone for the comments you guys rock
Sent by corinnescott27,Jan 4, 2009

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