Analiese!- Making your poem about Mulan made me roll my eyes. I think the rhyme scheme made your second stanza super forced. I don't think your as told by anal look stands out enough. There's something safe about this and I can't put my finger on it.
LaTasha!- I was hooked that you were the lying girl. I don't think you wrote a sestina, but I appreciated the effort. The crown on Darren's head is just marvelous and you look so relaxed in that window.
Idaho!- Out of all the basic rhyming girls your poem didn't make me cringe. I think you could do more with your runways because I like it, but I think you can push the envelope farther.
Octillery- Didn't post.
Rehab!- Your poem made me laugh once, but I think writing it about snick made me not happy lol. I think your runway is kinda boring? And tbh most of your runways are just super safe most of the time. I get the reference and your brand, but white mediocrity isn't that good of a brand.
Slim Thik!- Writing a haiku is an easy way out, but I thought yours worked really well. I'm glad your runway tells a story a lot of these girls just slapped a dress on Miranda and called it a day.
Triplechin!- The poem felt like a struggle for you, but I kinda liked it? There's something charming in it. I think this runway is stellar and I'm glad you helped her kill Carl, his ass is annoying.
Twinkie!- I don't think your poem was as terrible as some people, but it wasn't funny to me. There's more to poetry than what Tati did. I just think this is a poofy dress that you copied twice. The runway portion of the game is getting tougher and you've done better in the completion that I was underwhelmed by this.
