I thought this was eh a good performance with those notes and what you did but it wasn't a great performance as you need to make sure it is right and with this it felt messy with so much going on and that is good showing it but you have to connect with us and you just need to lay it back next time and just sung with your vocals so I know what you can do.
My only problem with this performance is that I feel this song isn't for your voice simply because your accent comes through a lot in this performance and it just affects the whole performance for me, I am so sorry :(.
