MY CRITIQUES:
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Zya:
Now this photo is absolutely stunning!!!!!!!! I am in love with this partially underwater shot where your face is beautiful, and those eyes are definitely the main focus to this photo. They are very engaging, like there is a mysterious story behind them. I am so happy you done better this week as last week I was disappointed but NOW YOU ARE BACK!!!!!!!!!!
Rafael:
WOW this is very edgy and unique, I kind of like it! Your outfit is very androgynous, and the mixture of colours is very funky and modern. I do like your face, I wish it was a bit closer so I could see so those beautiful blue eyes but it is not that far so I cant see them, so well done! The eyes may not be the main focus here, but what I can see of them it is good.
Joss:
DAMNNNNNNNNNN those eyes are killing me right through my core. They are for sure the main focus of this photo and they stand out even more due to the fact that the light or reflection of the water helps them be highlighted. My only little critique is that I wish your face wasn’t cut off, but I do like this shot very different!
Kasia:
This photo has such a futuristic vibe to it that it helps it stand out from the bunch of
photos. The make-up brings those dark brown eyes out, so good job with making sure they are the focus of the shot. Your hair looks great and overall this is another good shot from you <3
Mason:
Now I do have to give you credit for making your eyes look emphasised, but this is just tooooooo casual for All Stars! You did so well last week so I am really sad that this photo is not 100% great. It is more of a catalogue photo selling that outfit not an editorial FRONT COVER shot, im sorry!
September:
WOW! What an improvement from last week. You have gone for a similar photo to Zya but I do feel that she went for more neutral colours and you have gone down the more colourful path. So I can appreciate the contrast between the two shots. Your eyes look sexy and the colour does make it a little too much but its not that affected. One bit of advice if you are here next week, give me a shot that has a little less colour <3
Moo:
Now this is very different to your normal shots! I am so impressed that you can be a versatile model as for a super-models they need to be able to adapt to all situations. Those eyes are the main focus here, the green grassy colour makes them stand out more. The simplicity of this shot just really highlights those eyes, so good job!
Kayla:
Those blue eyes are gorgeous and they are for sure the main focus of this shot. It is a little too cropped for my liking, I wish your hole face was in the shot. But I do appreciate the path you have gone down to make sure that your eyes are beautiful. Nice shot.
Valentin:
<3 errrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr this is so good! Another great shot of a model with green eyes. However unlike other models you used natural lighting to make them stand out more. The setting looks great, my only critique is that the rest of your face looks a bit tense and it takes a little bit of attention of your eyes.
