PLAI'S CRITIQUES
Bo Deysicous
Look:
Bo... Bo... Bo... You really bigged yourself up in the Skype chat. That naturally means high expectations, but in my opinion... This absolutely hits the nail right on the head! Everything about this outfit is 100% right and I can't even say anything to help improve it, this is a perfect look! Keep up the great work!
Challenge:
THIS HAS 24 LINES IN IT! DISQUALIFIED!
Okay I kid, but this was actually a pretty good rap if you ask me, but I didn't entirely get 'spell' from it is the only real problem I have with it.
Annady Juno
Look:
I think this is a pretty good look, the mug is really cool looking and the dress is a really good one too. However, I feel like this is 2 aesthetics fused together. I get a Haitian voodoo style from the face and then a Victorian style from the dress. It's not bad, I just personally feel that you could have fused the two styles better.
Challenge:
Now this, I actually get spell from and it flows really nicely. And yes Annady, everything had to rhyme, it's a part of the challenge.
Pussy O'Plenty
Look:
This one is... Weird. And not entirely in a good way. Once again, an amazing face which is let down with a decent, but forgettable outfit. I personally would have gone with a crazy witch aesthetic with tattered clothes to tie it into the face. If you make it to next week I want you to think "Does this outfit fit with this mug?" and I guarantee, you will go far.
Challenge:
Another really good effort on the challenge, as it actually read like a spell and it all rhymed really well too. However I'll have to dock you because it was too long. (The max was 20 lines and I counted 24).
Aishah Ali
Look:
Ummm... This look is... Definitely something. I can definitely see where you're coming from with the whole using fetuses as the outfit and once again, the form is amazing. But I'm let down with the accessories again. I don't really get why you chose to do the blue glove when your body is green and I have no idea of what that hair is supposed to be. The little witch hat was neat touch however.
Challenge:
I personally think this verse is okay. Not really groundbreaking but still quite good. I do like the fairy tale kind of structure to it in a way but it didn't entirely scream spell to me.
Dame Shady T. Bagg
Look:
Another amazing look I have little to no problems with! I can clearly read it as a spellcaster/witch and all of the accessories, colours and the mug all match to make everything work well together as a look. It's a lot simpler than the other looks, but sometimes, simple is best.
Challenge:
Now this is a true spell! I really love the added detail of the spell in a different language but it would be useless if the English version didn't hold up. This, however, held up fantastically!
Mustard Monroe
Look:
After your pretty good week 0 runway, I can't help but feel a little bit disappointed by this look. I do like the colour of the hair and the mug is a good one too, however, the outfit doesn't really do anything to match it. The hair gives me 'good witch' where's the outfit is giving me evil/sexy witch. If you had gone with a bit of a brighter coloured outfit or a darker coloured hair and mug, it would have fit way better. However, based on Talian's critique, I'm probably the minority.
Challenge:
I have mixed feelings about this spell. It feels more like a couple of reads as opposed to a genuine spell and you did go over the line limit by one (I'm counting you saying the names as lines). However, they were pretty good on their own, but they just didn't entirely fit the challenge.