Intead of do my critics girl by girl, I will do my critics in other way so I can compare all three of you.
Bikini Shots:
From the 3 of you, the photo that most suprise me was Kaylan photo. Girl you look fierce and sexy and that pose is amazing, you're showing all. The bikini is amazing and suits you amazingly and it just scream perfection.
Then theres Jelena photo, that is also great but a little bit boring for me. I would espect something more diferent at this stage of the competition, but Its a good photo, just not the best.
Finally we have Deena, and I think this is your best shoot, you can do so much better. First problem for me in the frame of the picture. It cut your leg and I look at it and it looks like you just have one leg, you should have showed both, its looks awkward like this. And the second problem is the face, it looks so dead, no emotion, nothing really there.
Sepia Shots:
This one was a litlle more difficult to choose becouse I though all of you did great but Kaylan, you again did a fantastic job, I just love this one. A close-up that shows alot of model potential in you. It looks so natural and effortless and at the same time it looks professional.
The we have Deena, and I can see a big difference between this photo and the other one. This one is very good. Medieval goes sexy and fierce. I love this concepte, and your pose its so simple but at the same time so amazing.
Finally we have Jelena, and this close up looks fantastic. It isnt as good as Kaylan's but its very good. The face looks fantastic and your eyes are beautiful. The hand on the head looks a little bit distracting but other then that, great job.
Last part is the slogan:
I wont get in details on this I will just say some word about each slogan.
Deena - It kind of cute I must say. It says something about you but my problem is that If I hadnt seen the explanation I would be thinking that you're a little bit a " bitchy girl " becouse of the " Coming right at you " thing. And I think you went for the obvious.
Jelena: I must tell you that this slogan doesnt really affect me or make me fell and to know your brand. I really need to read the explanation to really get into it and when I read it I'm like wow, I like this brand. But if I was reading a magazine I wouldnt think twice on turning the page.
Kaylan: When I read you slogand I feel like, "Uh, I'm not sure if I like this brand but let me just see what is about". And then I read I'm like " Now I understand, its kind of cool. " But the explanation could be more detailed becouse some people might not get it all.