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Another One of My Poems. Please comment

May 17, 2009 by rohvenk1
SHE DANCES

The night falls gently on her shoulders
As she dances all her pain away
I look at her, lost in emotions
That’s sweeping through me

The silence seems to overcome her
As she dances away the sorrow
Of having to live in a world
Where there’s no place for love

She dances like an angel
But her clothes are stained with blood
For she’s been left broken
With no one to care for her

She dances like the sunshine
Flowing through a waterfall
She wants to love this world
But all she’s seen is sadness.

She cannot wait to bid adieu
To this world and to me and you
For we listen with our minds
Ignoring our hearts

Before she leave
She wishes to say
‘If you want to be happy
Listen to your heart
And dance everyday.”

Comments

i dont like it
Sent by quirolo,May 17, 2009
You have Joey added!
Sent by Tom8478,May 17, 2009
i find this demeaning, both as a woman and a man.
Sent by Alisowned,May 17, 2009
I find it erotic.
Sent by xAdam93x,May 17, 2009
i luv your poems.. fantastic!! : )
Sent by EssexGirl,May 17, 2009
Thank you, Essex :)
Sent by rohvenk1,May 18, 2009
nice poem!
Sent by jerone,May 18, 2009

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