This is a new song me and my band have written...we're kind of rock/grunge/alternative...so lemme know what you think of it, good OR bad!
TO LIVE
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So you're not on the street
Living the life of the esteemed
That's alright
We'll fight tonight
Try to explain myself
But no time for explanations
I'll use my best excuse
It's hard to execute
Will you take my retrebute
Time flies by, you're not having fun
What's the sense in life if you're feeling done
Pardon me but i don't like your way
Cuz how much time is left today
I'll take my chances now (x3)
Reaching for unseen stars
Expanding your mind a little too far
Praying for a stake
In something bigger than us
Following all the rules
That make you alter your own view
To shade your fear
Then death is here
Well i'm hard pressed to care
Time flies by you're not having fun
What's the sense in life if you're feeling done
Pardon me but i don't like your way
Cuz how much time is left today
I'll take my chances now (x3)
Repeat first verse and pre-chorus...
I'll take my chances now (x3)
It'd obviously make more sense with the actual music behind it, but it sounds pretty good. I'm going to keep posting new songs! Thanks for any feedback!
Comments
do you have any videos/music online? i would definitely check it out if you did
no dude...not yet...but we're working on it...probably late this year, early next year...we're still new to the game, to be honest...but we don't sound horrible, at least...lolz
