You didn't win me over as this felt like a music with the music and your voice but I think I see a bit of potential when you let your voice shine so maybe you need to find a song that can show more of your vocals so I know what you are capable of.
This was not bad by any means, I'm just not the biggest fan of it and for that reason I didn't say yes. I liked your voice but it just was not going anywhere, it just left me wanting more, sorry :(.