CRITIQUES
Now Jacob Burns did not post. He has been very busy with work. I didn't have time to wait so sorry Jacob but you will be up for elimination. Make it work!
Aishah Ali: I really enjoyed your sitcom pitch. It was the shortest pitch but I thought it was soooo funny. I think it'd be an entertaining show to watch. I think the setting really works well for you and I think it was one of the funnier pitches. The runway was good. I think for a look queen like you, a camp runway is hard enough. So, doing a fatsuit with some McDonalds was a good choice and still allows you to play to your strengths.
Bloom Bastique: I really loved your sitcom pitch. I think doing anything Trump-related is what sells ratings. I think the idea is cool of an alternate universe of Trump being black. I also like how you called it Black House, for some reason that alone really got me. Your runway also hit theme, I enjoyed the bear heard and latex model wear.
Chocolate: Your sitcom pitch was ok. I don't hate it but I dont love it. I felt like your pitch was set up to be more of a movie than a sitcom. I also got a little confused with the whole, she sells rigged condoms and it's a dystopian world.. idk I think it had potential but I don't see it right now as a whole. The runway, I like it, my only problem is how it fits into the theme. Bloom's works because it is made into something comical or over the top, this did not do that.
Plai: I think your pitch was the most realistic. I think it's a cool idea for the show to be the next "office" or "parks and rec" those are my favorite type of comedies so I think you nailed that. I am really living for your Velma runway. You really told a story and it was amazing. I was really here for it.
Sandy: I thought your sitcom was cute but there was so much. You are a transgender woman who is now president? I mean if you did just a story on a trans girl I think would have been better. I just wasn't feeling it. The runway is cute but I don't think screams CAMP.
Xania: Your sitcom really read Riverdale or Pretty Little Liars. I think the concept is really cool and fun but I just did not the humor into it. It also can be read for a movie so that just falls for me a bit as well. I think the runway is a decent idea but some of the components are really boring and I hate the shoes. The shoes are so longer than your dress so... yeah.
Well, ladies, I think I am ready to make some choices...