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E5: ~Critiques~

Topic » E5: ~Critiques~

2141 days 6 hours ago
dawnpeacly
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Hello ladies! Welcome to the main stage of Dawns Drag Race!

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This week, I challenged my girls to create their own Super Hero runway look with a summary of their power and their meaning! Super easy... Right? Well apparently not to be honest because~ Well you'll have to find out in critiques...

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So... Let's begin! Gentlemen... start your engines...
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First up...

Red Ruby!:
https://imgur.com/a/A48JWVJ
This is Miss Gear Head. She lives in a steampunk universe and was created by an evil doctor. His Experiment went wrong and instead of creating a weapon of destruction, he created a new hero who uses the gears and weapons she creates to destroy all of his plans.

Ivonka Slut!:
https://imgur.com/a/tCjilJT
Introducing.... OCTA PUSSY! You're probably wondering, what is this tentacle FREAK doing here? Well, Octa Pussy is the newest super hero in the Marvel Universe! Rather than fighting crime, if you display her octopus logo in the sky, she'll come and give you a free blowjob... with her tentacles! Have friends who want some action too? Don't worry, all of you can get action at once, as Octa Pussy has prehensile control over each and every one of her tentacles, on full display in this runway outfit! You'll never need to put those hands to work anymore, thanks to Octa Pussy!

Misty Shade!:
http://imgur.com/gallery/PcbzZ7z
This is dragquisha the super drag queen
Her superpower is to turn anyone into a fabulous drag queen with a swish of her hands
Her meaning is to make the world a better place one drag queen at a time

Litter Ally!:
https://imgur.com/a/2wLKPzw
NO NEED TO FEAR, ACID SPERM LADY IS HERE!

Aurora Belarachy!:
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Here is Phoebee the Queen B! Let me tell you a bit about miss Phoebee. Phoebee got stung by a bee which transformed her into one! Her special power is her stinger ray which releases a liquid which splats on the villains face and blinds them so that she can then go in for the kill. Phoebee is not like most other bees, normally they only have one sting before they die but Phoebee has infinite stings which are way more powerful and can kill anyone in one poke!

TaBestBicha!:
https://imgur.com/a/ac57x1I
This is BurnBichaBurn! After TaBestBicha was abused by her fiancée she fell into a great depression. She cut herself and took heavy doses of depression pills which caused her pussy to burn from inside out! After the fire snatched her body she awoke in the pits of hell. Rumour has it that if you commit suicide you go to hell and you will kill yourself again, and again, and again and you can never escape. But bicha was an exception! She sucked off Lucifer to get her skinny ass body back and she returned to the overworld! Her main job... to spread suicidal thoughts around the world. She a bad bitch!

Blonde!:
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I mean yea, it's kinda skimpy, but why would miss Blood Blonde wear any defensive armor when she can just summon one?

JerryOnTheSunday!:
https://drive.google.com/open?id=14l7mbn1vheTeMl5yuQj27Cs6ZkgupusD
https://drive.google.com/open?id=1ff2eKjF8rgpMm_4cFSzwhaYeN7XaTmjn
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Kandy Kadette, birthed as Ella Fischer, was born during a time of heightened tensions between global superpowers, that would eventually blow up into a destructive world war. The AMBP (Authoritative Military Bureau of Power), seeing that they were in the midst of losing the war, launched a slew of some of the most heinous government/military projects known to mankind to ensure their victory. Ella Fischer, a girl the age of 11, was sent off by her mother to engage in one of these military projects, under false pretences her child would return safely home. Young Ella, was sent to an apocalyptic like environment along with a dozen or so kids, and were told they had four days to kill each other or they all died. It left a deep trauma on Ella, and it's one of the reasons why Kandy's drive to fight evil and prevent things like this ever happening again is so strong. After Ella emerged victorious, she automatically underwent a lot of laboratory tests and genetic mutation by AMBP scientists, to turn her into Kandy Kadette, or as the scientists called her, Agent Sucrose. Automatically she was to work as a slave of the state- a war machine. Eventually after mindless fighting and killing, Kandy stopped and rethinked her actions. She thought to herself that she needed to find out for herself as to what is worth fighting for and what is good and inherently bad in the world. She still serves the state, only now she has purpose, and does much more saving than killing. Soon over time, the AMBP's dark era of government projects and corruption within high ranks slowly came to a halt, and now they intend to act for the greater good, a cause that Kandy can finally align herself with.

(WORK AS SUPERHERO)
In her career as a superhero, Kandy Kadette has many accomplishments that span over a decade's work. Her meaning however, is saving innocent citizens from cruel terrorists and enemies of the opposing side. Often times she rushes into the ruins of entire cities, to save stuck citizens and families from looming dangerous organizations, that seek to overtly ruin and terrorize other people. She also serves as a spy for the AMBP, under the code name, you guessed it "Agent Sucrose". This involves taking down corrupt politicians and dictators, saving unstable countries from the brink of destruction and serving as a spy. She is widely recognized under her alias "Agent Sucrose", within the government and is considered one of the greatest to ever serve the AMBP, possibly the country.

(SUPERPOWERS AND ABILITIES)
Kandy Kadette was riddled with an odd fetish for inappropriate combat costumes,  ridiculous amount of powers and abilities that sound straight from urban legends. Her superpower is generating and fighting with candy weapons, and saving innocent civilians from war torn countries. She's been described by those she has saved, a superhuman with great strength, sound accuracy, and a heightened sense of her surroundings. She can cut down bullets, generate candy weapons from thin air due to her genetic mutation, and sense an ambush from a mile away. As her name suggests, many of her weapons and gadgets revolve around sugary items and confections. Her weapon of choice is a giant submachine gun that shoots fatal Tootsie Roll bullets, a shiv made out of Jolly Ranchers, and a grenade that blows up maple syrup to slow the enemy. Whenever she isn't fighting for the AMBP, she's feeding the homeless children candy, and letting curious pedestrians awkwardly lick her Jolly Rancher shiv.

Now... To the critiques...
2141 days 6 hours ago
dawnpeacly
Misty Shade: Hi Misty! Let me just say... This is the best you’ve looked on the runway yet! You look really pretty and absolutely gorgeous tonight! But I don’t get super hero from this at all and bot only that, the power doesn’t relate to your look what so ever. You look amazing but you didn’t quite the challenge right... Ugh.

Red Ruby: Hi Ruby! I love the concept, you look cool! I love the gears, the look is very polished and nice. But gurl, those heels are SO ugly. I hate them. Like I literally hate them. It looks like a big chunky boot. And your name is so basic but I find it funny, “Miss Gear Head” lmao I don’t know why I find it funny. The summary relates to the look and you even give a back story to it so I like this.

Ivonka Slut: Hi Ivonka! Gurl, Oh my god, This was so good. You look AMAZING. The summary is hilarious, Ms. Octopussy is gonna take the competition down! You even made your own logo and it looks good! Omg this look. Its so good This is DEFINITELY a step up from last episode. Good work Ms. Slut.

Litter Ally: Hi Litter! I just wanna say... what the fuck LMAO. This is so funny. I love the gif you made and how it just changes, its so goofy and totally you, love the penis. But sadly, that’s the only thing I like. The look is basic, it’s just a top. Like... I know you can do so much better then this. And not only that, you didn’t give a summary of what the power is or her purpose. You just submitted the look. The power is obvious but what’s her purpose. You kinda only did half of the challenge and not only that, the half you did wasn’t as good as I know you can do.

JerryOnTheSunday: Hi Jerry! Let me just say that you look amazing! I love the candy theme, it stays true to your shtick, I love it. And your backstory was A LOT and I got bored of it. But it was still good and it relates with your look. I don’t have much criticism besides the fact that you kinda bored me but you still did good!

Aurora Belarachy: Hi Aurora! So I read the summary and I saw that it was a bee super hero and I got super excited because that’s unqiue and i had a bunch of silhouettes in my mind so I liked the summary, liked the idea, and the look itself is okay. Its a straight up bee. But that hair is SO bad. I think you should’ve gone bald for this and in all honesty, I wish you kinda stayed human then rather just being a generic bee. Ivonka Slut did an octopus but still stayed human, thats what made her unique and such. But the look is good.

TaBestBicha: Hi Bicha! So im gonna be honest... I don’t really like this look... Like its meh. Compared to your last week look, this just sucks. You could’ve done ANYTHING and you walk out here with just like a leotard. Your neck up, Good. I like it. But if your neck down compared to all of that then this look would’ve been good but I feel like it was a little lazy. I like the leotard but at the same tome I don’t because it’s basic. You and Jerry both had a leotard but the thing is, Jerry looked good because it was all contrasted. Her neck up kept true to her neck down, that’s what made her look so good, if you did the same thing as Jerry, you’d be in a WAY better position. The summary was okay, it made me laugh. The summary was kinda the only thing I liked about it.

Blonde: Hi Blonde! Your runway is classic blonde, sexiness! And I love it! Your power was summoning an armor and I like it. Your look very polished, colors are right, look is right, everything is right to be honest! But... you’re in the same boat as your sister Litter Ally... you didn’t tell us what the power was or their meaning... You just submitted a look... Your power was obvious so im not gonna count off for that, same with Litter, but you didn’t tell us what their meaning was. You look so good tonight, I just wish you followed the full instructions.
2141 days 6 hours ago
dawnpeacly
Now... To The hard part...
2141 days 6 hours ago
Magik
butt
2141 days 6 hours ago
dawnpeacly
If I call your name.... Please step forward...
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Red Ruby...
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You're the only girl safe this week. Good job.
2141 days 6 hours ago
dawnpeacly
Misty Shade....
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Litter Ally...
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You two did not fly high this week. In fact, y’all crash landed.
I’m sorry but you two are apart of the Bottom 4 this week.
2141 days 6 hours ago
Magik
frick!!!
2141 days 6 hours ago
Magik
2141 days 5 hours ago
dawnpeacly
Ivonka Slut...
JerryOnTheSunday...

You two are the only tops this week! Good job.
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Ivonka Slut...
This week you put the W in my vagina. I don’t know what that means but you did good.
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JerryOnTheSunday...
This week you not only gave us a sugar tooth... But cravings for more...
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Ivonka Slut...
Condragulations! You are the winner of this weeks challenge!

You win... Nothing. Fuck you.

JerryOnTheSunday, you’re safe. You may join Ruby in the back.
Ivonka Slut, please stay present on stage.
2141 days 5 hours ago
Magik
*defends*
2141 days 5 hours ago
Magik
page 2
2141 days 5 hours ago
Magik
i’m done scrolling
2141 days 5 hours ago
Magik
aaa
2141 days 5 hours ago
Magik
bitch wtf
2141 days 5 hours ago
Magik
😫😫😫
2141 days 5 hours ago
Magik
kms

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