Imo this is a bit messy out of tune at times offkey sometimes just a bit of a mess in all aspects, but I also hate everything about old music and just say #LetHerDie @ donna summers... but you showed amazing stage presence and lit vocals so....
The stage presence was definitely there. And you had some power behind your vocals. You were off pitch sometimes but we don't have any real performers yet. You were the first to put on a show!
I give the performance a A but your vocals was B-/C+. You need to work on stabling your voice when your performing. For me this isnt my cup of tea at all.