Ugh okay, so I'm so so so on the fence with this one. I love your voice--it's so different, and those airy notes like at ~55 seconds is a really beautiful sound. BUT, I don't know how much I loved the song choice. Honestly, I think your voice has so much potential, but I think this song almost snuffed it.
I did rather enjoy the staging itself, and I thought the progression of the song (consistently growing in intensity) was smart, so I think you kind of just have the knack of a performer.
That being said, good vocals--which you have--is much harder to train than picking a better song. So based on your potential, I'm gonna give this a yes.