NOTE: I said that I was going to wait, but I wanted to know what people thought of the first episode before continuing. I wouldn't want people hating how these were written, and then me delivering the rest of the season like this. The rest will come out once they are done.
- Clarisse | 29 | Accountant | Slendie258
- Larry | 25 | Pizza Delivery | DumbGinger
- Greer | 26 | Social Media Correspondant | MyMilkshakes
- Jeremy | 18 | Student | Wuau
- Jake | 23 | Second Grade Teacher | Blazer44
- Carly | 23 | Nursing Student | CarlyJordan14
- Aryn | 27 | Psychologist | Kgunzrok
- David | 24 | Youtuber | Osiris
- Ron | 21 | Model | TR1364
Hope: I’m coming to you live from the Amazonian jungle, where eighteen individuals have come to battle it out, in the craziest social game of all time, for one million dollars. This is, Survivor Amazon.
*Malkano Tribe On Boat*
Chloe’s Confessional: My name is Chloe, and I’m a Digital Influencer. Strategy wise, my job says it all. I’m going to use my real life experience, to influence people to do what I say. My career revolves around influencing people. This will be a walk in the park.
Justin’s Confessional: As I look around the boat we’re on, I seem to be the oldest guy out here by far. Everyone seems to be in their twenties, and I just hit forty. In this crowd, I definitely stand out, no questions asked. I hope I don’t get eliminated for it. I know this game, and in the beginning, it’s so easy to just vote the odd man out. In this case, I’m that guy.
Shannon’s Confessional: On my tribe, there are definitely some good lookers, but I think I look the best. Oh my god, that sounded so conceited! Anyways, I want to play the flirt card, and manipulate these men to do my bidding.
*Taka Tribe On Boat*
Aryn's Confessional: As a psychologist, I’m excellent at reading people, and how to talk to people. I think that most people in this game, aren’t as good as me, when it comes to interacting with people. I know how to keep people calm, and how to work with practically anyone.
Clarisse’s Confessional: I might very well be one of the smartest people out here. I’m an accountant, and I prefer to do my job without a calculator. My mind is very analytical, and I’m constantly running numbers through my head. Survivor, is very much a numbers game.
Jeremy’s Confessional: I’m most likely one of the youngest, if not the youngest person out here. I’m eighteen, and still a student. Right now it’s summer break, so I’m not missing school or anything. It’s going to be crazy, when everyone asks what did you do this summer? I can say, I played Survivor. Not many people get to say that.
*The Boats Arrive / Everyone Steps out*
Hope: Welcome to Survivor, the Amazon. By now, you’ve probably analyzed you’re competition, at least on your tribe. Here’s your chance to get a look at who you’re competing against. Girl in the blue, what’s your name?
Cece: My name is Cece.
Hope: Cece, what do you think about the other tribe?
Cece: I think that there are definitely some strong players, but I think our tribe is definitely going to come out on top.
*A Few People Applaud*
Hope: With that, I’ll hand you maps to your new camps. I’ll see you at the challenge, good luck!
*Malkano Tribe Camp*
Bob: We made it! That only took two hours to find.
Josh: This place is beautiful. Being a cinematographer, or a photographer at all, I have an eye for beauty I guess.
Jacob: I’m going to guess it’s about noon based on the placement of the sun in the sky. I think we should start to work on the shelter, so that we’ll have a place to sleep.
Jacob’s Confessional: As much as I love chit chat, we’ve got to start working. I want to sleep on something other than the ground tonight, meaning we need to get started. These people may not appreciate my work ethic, but I think it’s vital out here to not procrastinate.
*Bob, Jacob, Max, Cece, and Justin Work On Shelter*
Justin: It’s weird. There’s nine of us, yet only five of us are working on the shelter.
Max: Agreed. I wonder where the other four are. We could really use their help.
Bob: They’re probably talking or something. They’ve made their group, we’ve made ours.
Max: Speaking of groups, I like this group right here. I think we could be a solid five.
Cece: I’m down. We’re the ones actually working.
Jacob: I’d love this. Having a solid group really early never hurts.
*Josh, Chloe, Azri, and Shannon Are By The Well*
Azri: Honestly, I just really didn’t want to work on the shelter. Like, it’s a hard job, and they seem to have it covered.
Chloe: I agree. They can handle the shelter.
Shannon: Honestly, I didn’t expect to be this dirty already. I was so unprepared for this.
Josh: I agree. I wasn’t quite ready for all the bugs. They’re horrible!
Azri’s Confessional: The first thing Shannon says to me is that she wasn’t expecting to get so dirty. Come on, this is Survivor! If you care more about the way you look, than playing the game, you shouldn’t be here. Shannon, shouldn’t be here. She’s a fish out of water.
*Taka Camp*
Carly: Here we are! We made it everyone!
Ron: Finally! That took fricken ages.
Ron’s Confessional: That was such a long hike. We got lost several times, due to some lousy map reading, but we finally made it I know that I have to start working on the shelter. I can’t be seen as some lazy person, while everyone else is working on the shelter. While it’s a good time to strategize, working on the shelter and being seen as a hard worker is ten times more important.
*David, Ron, Greer, and Jeremy Work On Shelter*
Greer: This shelter’s looking pretty nice. Does it worry you that the other five are somewhere else?
David: Nah, they said they were getting water. I think we need to trust that they’re doing what they say they’re doing.
Jeremy: Still, it’s suspicious that five people are all getting water together.
David: Yeah, I guess you’re right. I still think we shouldn’t assume that they’re using it to make an alliance. I think we should give them the benefit of the doubt.
Greer’s Confessional: David is so naive. He’s too trusting, and too honest. That’s going to be his downfall. People like me, can easily take advantage of his loyalty.
*Carly Looks For The Idol*
Carly’s Confessional: Right off the bat, I saw two different groups. The shelter people, and the well people. Two groups of four. I decided to go looking for the idol. The well people probably think I’m helping with the shelter and vice versa.
*Carly walks around, and eventually finds a hole in a tree. She looks inside and finds the idol*
Carly’s Confessional: I did it! I motherf*****g did it! This is huge. I’m not going home anytime soon with this baby keeping me safe. I think the best part is, I found this idol without a clue! How many people can say the same? Not many I tell you.
*Clarisse, Larry, Aryn, and Jake Are By The Well*
Aryn: Gross, this water is filthy. Look at it!
Jake: Oh my god, that looks disgusting.
Larry’s Confessional: So we get to the well and the water’s disgusting! It looks brown, and there’s stuff in it. The worst thing about this is, if we don’t drink it, we’ll be dehydrated.
Clarisse: We should head back quickly before people get too suspicious. Everyone should take a jug back.
Larry: Good idea.
*Immunity Challenge*
Hope: Come on in guys!
*Both tribes enter and stand on their mats*
Hope: For this challenge, 5 people will swim out into the water and grab a bag. Once they’re back, 1 person will then untie the bags. Inside the bags are puzzle pieces. The remaining three tribe members will solve the puzzle. First tribe to finish wins immunity, and fire in the form of flint. The losers, a date at tribal council with me, where someone will be the first person voted out.
*Tribes Get Ready*
Hope: The swimmers for Malkano are Bob, Jacob, Max, Cece, and Justin. Larry, Greer, Jeremy, David, and Ron are swimming for Taka. The bag untied for Malkano is Shannon, and for Taka is Jake. Everybody else is on the puzzle.
Survivors ready, GO!
*Jacob, Greer, and Jeremy are in the lead while Max begins to fall behind. Everyone at Taka makes it to the bags.
Hope: Taka can swim their bags back. Malkano is waiting on Max!
*Max makes it and Malkano takes their bags*
Hope: Taka is back, Jake can start untying those knots! Malkano is still out in the ocean.
*Malkano returns and Jake finished untying the bags*
Hope: Shannon can start untying their knots. Greg has finished for Taka, and they can start on their puzzle.
*Shannon quickly unties the knots while Taka is halfway done with their puzzle*
Hope: Both tribes are now in the puzzle. Malkano needs to pick it up if they want to win this.
Clarisse: Done!
Hope: Do they have it? No! Keep working. This opens up a gap for Malkano.
Josh: We're done!
Hope: They are correct meaning Malkano wins immunity! Taka, amazing effort but just not good enough. I'll see you at tribal. Malkano, here is your flint, both tribes, head back to camp.
*Malkano Camp*
Chloe, Max, and Azri work on the fire*
Chloe: This is my first time trying to make a fire.
Azri: Really? I've been prepping for this for a while now. Let me try.
*Azri starts the fire*
Max: You did it!
*Everyone comes to congratulate Azri*
Max’s Confessional: after my bad challenge performance, I really wanted to start the fire to make myself look useful. It ss because now I have to watch Azri become even more likes by the tribe, while I'm still on the bottom.
*Taka Camp*
*David, Ron, Greer, and Jeremy are by the beach*
Greer: This sucks, we had the lead.
Jeremy: everything was going great until the puzzle.
Ron: It's a good reason to get rid of one of the other five out. Specifically Clarisse, Carly, or Aryn. They cost us the challenge.
*Jeremy looks at the rice, and sees that a significant amount has been consumed*
Jeremy’s Confessional: So I was bored, and so I looked into the rice container. Nearly a third of it is gone already! How is that even possible? We put it up in a tree so no big animals could get at it.
Ron’s Confessional: I 100% blame those three girls for what happened. We had a pretty big lead going into the puzzle, but they blew it. I personally want Aryn out of this game. She seems weak in challenges, and has not talked to me once this game. Right now, I'll do whatever I need to, to send her packing, even if that means lying a little
Ron: So, right before the challenge, I talked to Aryn and she said she didn't like you David. I asked why, and she said she just had a vibe.
David: I'm not that surprised. She hasn't talked to me yet, and doesn't go near me around camp.
Greer: So are we voting Aryn? I heard that _____ was stealing extra rations of rice.
Jeremy: What?! When I looked in the rice container, there did seem to be a ton of rice gone.
David: _____ won't get away with this. They will be receiving my vote tonight.
Greer: Same here.
Ron: Agreed.
*Clarisse, Larry, Jake, and Aryn are talking*
Clarisse: Right now, we need a plan. Obviously the others are probably targeting one of us for our bad challenge performance.
Jake: There has to be someone willing to flip.
Larry: When we went back to deliver the water, I didn’t see Carly with the shelter builders. Maybe she wasn’t with them at all.
Clarisse: She could be our saving grace.
Aryn: Now, who do we vote for?
Jake: Assuming that Carly votes with us, I think it would be smart to vote for ____.
Larry: That’s a good idea!
*Jake pulls Carly aside*
Jake: Hey, can we talk?
Carly: Of course, what about?
Jake: About the vote. RIght now, I see a group of four that I’m part of, and I want you to be the fifth. On the other side, is presumably another group of four. As the swing vote, you really get to decide who goes. Looking past that, the shelter people want to vote for someone who did poorly at the challenge, mainly the puzzle group, including you. My side has the puzzle group. Their side is targeting either you, Aryn, or Clarisse. If you vote with us, we’re voting _____.
Carly: I’ll definitely think about it.
Carly’s Confessional: Oh my god, I have so much power. From finding the idol to becoming the swing vote. I have not made my mind up yet, but we’ll see what happens at tribal.
*Tribal Council*
Hope: Welcome to the first tribal council of Survivor Amazon. Let’s start with the questions. Greer, what’s the feeling like coming back from camp after that challenge.
Greer: Well, our morale is definitely down, and I think we’re all feeling the effects of no flint. We’ve made about one fire, but it takes more than one to function.
Hope: Clarisse, being one of the puzzle people and ultimately causing the tribe the challenge, how nervous are you right now?
Clarisse: Extremely nervous. I think that I could very much be targeted this tribal.
Hope: Jeremy, besides challenge performance, what else might you base your vote off of?
Jeremy: Well, it was revealed that someone’s been eating a lot of the rice. We’re already a third of the way through our rice. I’m pretty sure I know the culprit but I want to give them a chance to open up about it before I reveal.
Hope: Well, would anyone like to make a stand?
Larry: I’m not going to lie, I did take some extra rice but it wasn’t a third of the container. I was feeling nauseous and I needed to eat.
Jeremy: You could have come to us about it but what pisses me off is that you went behind our backs.
Hope: After hearing all of this, the vote could go a lot of ways. Carly, how sure are you that the person you’re voting for is going to be the one that goes.
Carly: Honestly, I’m not that sure anymore. This is definitely going to be one unpredictable tribal.
Hope: With that, it is time to vote. Aryn, you’re up first.
*Everyone Votes*
Hope: Alright, if anyone has a hidden immunity idol and would like to play it, now would be the time to do so.
*Carly looks into her bag but doesn’t stand*
Hope: I’ll read the votes.
First Vote
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*Flips Vote*
LARRY
Second Vote
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*Flips Vote*
DAVID
Third Vote
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*Flips Vote*
LARRY
Fourth Vote
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*Flips Vote*
LARRY
Fifth Vote
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*Flips Vote*
DAVID
Sixth Vote
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*Flips Vote*
DAVID
Seventh Vote
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*Flips Vote*
DAVID
Eight Vote
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*Flips Vote*
LARRY
Ninth Vote
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First person voted out of Survivor Amazon
*Flips Vote*
DAVID
Hope: David, please bring me your torch.
*David does so in shock*
Hope: David, the tribe has spoken.
If I’ve learned anything from tonight, it’s that this tribe is split right down the middle.
Grab your torches and head back to camp.
Was this first episode too long? Perfect length!
Do you like your character? Greer is already an icon. Love how she was the first to point out the people getting water, saying she'd use David's loyalty to her advantage and throwing Larry under the bus for eating all of the rice. Sad that she's in minority but I have faith in her.
Who do you think is in trouble? Probably Jeremy, Greer and Ron for being in the minority
Any other feedback? Great first episode :)
Was this first episode too long? Nope good
Do you like your character? Yes im pretty good would hope for some more airtime
Who do you think is in trouble? Everyone
Any other feedback? I see Carly going far
Was this first episode too long? No I like longer episodes, helps give more depth to the characters
Do you like your character? Well it sets me up for a great underdog story I'll give you that, but my chances are looking a bit slim when it comes to challenge performances. Hopefully I will pull a Cirie here.
Who do you think is in trouble? Greer, Jeremy, and Ron. They are in the minority but Carly seems like one to cause chaos so you never know.
Any other feedback? Keep writing episodes like these, they are great.
Was this episode to long?: NO!!! The longer the better!!!!
Do you like your character?: I wish he would've gotten a few more lines, but I like him.
Who do you think is in trouble?: the minority alliance on the Taka tribe
Was this first episode too long? Not too long not too short. its great
Do you like your character? so far I like it although i might be in trouble
Who do you think is in trouble? me and the bottom 4 people in Malkano
Any other feedback? Not really just keep continue do this :)
It seems like the real show!
Keep up the good work!