Madison runs into the school, falling to the ground once she enters, she turns around to see a young male and female at the door, the male stabs a walker in the head while the girl slams and locks the door
Boy: hey are you ok
Madison: yeah I'm fine, who are you people
Girl: were the people that just saved your arse
Boy: Tisha come on now she almost got eaten
Tisha: I know Chris, I'm only messing with her
Tisha holds out her hand to Madison helping her up
Tisha: I'm Tisha and that fairy there is Chris
Chris: I may be a fairy but I can still shank you bitch
They both laugh while walking down the corridor with Madison
Madison: so have you guys been here since it all started
Chris: yep, me, Tisha and a couple others have been here since it's the safest place we know
Madison: what about the other people that came..
Tisha: they died and we had to give mercy just like all the other poor souls
Chris: come on this way, we will introduce you to the rest of them
-End Of Scene-
Back at the hotel, the group are organising the supplies and sharing them out
Sierra: can you guys hurry up, I want my share
Henry: your share you didn't earn
Sierra: what did you say!
Lucia: you heard him Sierra, just suck it up buttercup
Sierra: oh ok, now listen here bitch...
Henry: Holdyn!
Holdyn: yeah I know, Sierra come on babe, let's relax
Holdyn and Sierra leave the room while Sue enters
Sue: can you too just leave it be for one minute
Lucia: why she deserves it
Sue: she may do, but we're all here together so we need to stick together
Henry: but we can still be honest
Sue: just remember your age and take it in your mind
Henry: I just get it Sue how do you...
Sue: not retaliate to Sierra
Henry: yep
Sue: it's simply....I remember she's still young and she like all of us are dealing and processing with this new world
Lucia: uh huh
Sue: Lucia, unless you want me to speak my mind I suggest you shut it too
Lucia: damn Sue got sassy
Sue winks and smiles at Henry and Lucia as she exits the room
-End Of Scene-
Chris, Tisha and Madison walk down a corridor to a room with a sign saying cafeteria. They enter the room to seeing three other people in there, two are together whilst one is sitting in the corner
Boy: hey Chris, whose the chick
Chris: this is Madison, now be say and introduce yourself
Madison: hi I'm Maddy
Boy: I'm Daniel and this is Parker and the weirdo in the corner is Buffy
Tisha: Daniel! we spoke about this
Parker: gotta admit it's true
Madison: what's wrong with her
Daniel: she just don't wanna talk to us
Chris: she is just dealing with a lot, the whole end of the world thing is taking its toll on her
Madison: I hope she's ok
Buffy sits alone away from everyone, tapping her knife in a specific order, she starts to get a smile on her face
-End of Scene-
Holdyn and Sierra are sitting on a balcony while Sierra is having a cigarette. Holdyn looks over to her
Holdyn: you calmed down yet
Sierra continues smoking her cigarette
Holdyn: is there any point in trying to give you my advice
Sierra: what's the point in listening, the world's going to shit as it is
She throws her cigarette over the balcony
Holdyn: you can't feel like that
Sierra: then how am I meant to feel Holdyn, all my friends are dead, all my family's dead, the only people I have are you people I don't know
Holdyn: but Sierra, you may not know us but not at right now, I'm here with you making sure your alright
Sierra: but I just don't know if I can trust you yet
Holdyn: that's fair enough, however none of us have given you reason not too
He gets up and puts his hand on her shoulder
Holdyn: no matter what we need each other right now and I'm gonna be her for you
Sierra: thank you Holdyn
Sierra smiles at Holdyn as he walks away, she bites her lip as she looks out to the horizon. Holdyn exits the room and Sue appears from behind a door who appeared to hear everyone's, she looks into the room and at Sierra and smiles. Then the camera pans to the cigarette falling and landing on top of a zombie wandering around the courtyard.
-End Of Scene-
Back at the school the group are relaxing and chatting whilst Buffy is still in the corner by herself.
Daniel: so Madison what did you do before the world went to shit
Madison: um I was a military officer before it went down
Chris: makes sense since you were able to defend yourself against whose walkers
Madison: you saw that and didn't want to help!
Tisha: we were going too but we notice the herd the coming and notice you killing it so we saw you were safe
Daniel: i have a question, how are you a officer, your too young
Madison: cause I worked my butt off and showed the boys whose boss
Daniel goes silent
Tisha: damn Madison, I think that's the first I've seen him silent
Daniel: haha oh so funny Tisha
Madison looks over at Buffy looking concerned
Chris: what's up Madison
Madison: I'm worried about her
Daniel: well at least someone is
Chris: why don't you go talk to her, she might actually talk to you
Madison: you mean she hasn't spoken to any of you
Parker: not since the apocalypse started
Chris: we just give her food and she eats it and then goes to sleep
Madison: well I have to make sure she's alright
Madison gets up from the group and walks over to Buffy, she gets close to Buffy and sits next to her
Madison: hi, I'm Madison
Buffy stays silent
Madison: I just wanted to make sure your alright, I don't want you losing yourself in all this
Buffy still does not response
Madison: look just know if someone happens here, know I will look out for you and help you out ok
Madison gets up and returns the group, Buffy slowly looks over at the rest of the group and turns back around and starts hitting the ground with a knife in a specific pattern
Buffy: not long now til it happens
-End of Episode-
Thoughts on the episode?
What do you think of the group in the school?
Thoughts on the tension between Sierra and her group?
What is going on between Holdyn and Sierra?
What is Sue up too?
Thoughts on the relationship between all the survivors in the school?
Thoughts on what Madison said to Buffy?
What do you think Buffy is planning?
Favourite Character(s)?
Least Favourite Character(s)?
Any improvements or concerns you have?
Just to let everyone whose reading this know that the next couple of episodes will have more intense moments, just needed to show all the characters first and hopefully they will be a lot longer
Thoughts on the episode? I love the episode, even if there was no action. You are introducing the charcter to us and this is really important for the story
What do you think of the group in the school? They look safe from outside, but with Buffy inside their walls, I think they are in a serious danger.
Thoughts on the tension between Sierra and her group? I think she is just misunderstood. They don't have the right to not give her food. She is still a human being after all and not a zombie. I am on her side.
What is going on between Holdyn and Sierra? These 2, along with Sue are my favourite characters from the hotel group. Holdyn and Sierra would make a perfect couple.
What is Sue up too? I think she is not up to something, but I am sure that she wants to survive and to restore the balance in the group
Thoughts on the relationship between all the survivors in the school? I don't think that they know each other very well and they are clearly not good in fights with zombies, seeing them hiding and not helping people needing help *points Madison*. Also I think that Daniel likes Madison but not too sure.
Thoughts on what Madison said to Buffy? I think that nobody has even tried to understand her and Madison is the only one who knows what can happen if someone is that isolated and not .. sane.
What do you think Buffy is planning? I think she will go nuts and will try to kill somebody
Favourite Character(s)? Madison, Sierra, Holdyn, Sue and maybe Daniel
Least Favourite Character(s)? I don't dislike anyone thus far
Any improvements or concerns you have? You really have to introduce Iris, because Icarus_Mark is a great reader and you know, if his character is more involved, he will write really good and satisfying comments, that every writer loves to read.
Pretty much Katherinee_'s thoughts about this episode are about what my own are. Great job! :)
I think Buffy is hiding something that could become an upcoming key event. I don't know yet.
I'm beginning to see where Sierra's coming from, but I see what others are thinking too. Sierra needs to handle herself better.
I feel like Holdyn is just trying to keep the peace. With Holdyn, everyone would try to kill each other.
I think Sue is holding Lucia on a leash tbh That's the only clue I have.
They're pretty mixed. Another group that's looking like they're trouble.
Uh oh! This can't be good! Madison might have just woke up the dragon!
I don't know. I think she will be key later on.
I have no favorites or least favorites.
I'm thinking about Buffy's knife patterns. Did the Alien movies inspire you by any chance? She gives me Alien vibes.
Great
Everyone seems okay except Buffy
Petty
There are feelings there
Nothing, she just wants peace
Daniel Tisha and Madison are all cool
Sweet, she wants to help her
I wanna say she is just gonna try and kill someone but i feel like it could be a little bigger than that.
Madison,Holdyn,Sierra,Tisha, Daniel and Sue
none
Thoughts on the episode? I liked it! But i'm totally scared that Holdyn is going to die to create chaos since Sierra will be all alone then :-/
What do you think of the group in the school? I feel like they are all good for now but that the school will become overrun with zombies
Thoughts on the tension between Sierra and her group? I think either Sierra or Holdyn will die tbh or Sierra might be banished or something.
What is going on between Holdyn and Sierra? I felt chemistry but I wasn't sure if it was romantic or not but I like their bond :)
What is Sue up too? I think it might have something to do with Sierra
Thoughts on the relationship between all the survivors in the school? I think there is a hidden unstability that will shine soon and cause a death
Thoughts on what Madison said to Buffy? I think Madison shouldn't have said anything because she just arrived there and needed to settle in.
What do you think Buffy is planning? Maybe she will attack Sierra's group?
Favourite Character(s)? Holdyn, Sierra, Lucia
Least Favourite Character(s)? None so far
Any improvements or concerns you have? Everything was great!
