A camera pans onto a empty street, then onto a block of houses with no people around. Scenes of parks and city buildings are shown, then a wide shot of a city street is shown. Suddenly a walker appears at the front of the screen and looks like it is about to attack, suddenly a knife goes through the back of its head and it falls to the ground, then a figure in black walks past int the screen and heads into the difference.
-End Of Scene-
The camera pans into a hotel, rolling down the different floors, then into the main foyer and dining area where a group of survivors are finishing up boarding all the doors and windows.
Sierra: can someone pass me a nail please!
-Holdyn hands her a nail-
Holdyn: you just need to relax Sierra, we will get it done, be thankful that we're safe right now
Sierra: I just want to get this finished, I don't wanna get eaten in my damn sleep and where is that the old bitch
Holdyn: SIERRA!
-Sue walks in and smiles at Sierra-
Sue: I'm here, you can stop worrying yourself
-Sue starts looking out the window-
Sierra: the only person I'm worrying about is myself, I only have myself right now
Holdyn: that's not true
Sue: he's right Sierra, were all in this together now
Sierra: yeah whatever
-Sierra bangs the nail one last time-
Sierra: and that does it, we should be good for now
-End Of Scene-
A young girl is seen running through the streets, looking very panicked and afraid. She stabs a couple of walkers in the head and keeps on running, she runs to a building and bangs on the window
Madison: HELLO!
-she bangs again-
Madison: SERIOUSLY! Is anyone still here
Suddenly a walker appears on the other side of the window, Madison steps back and then looks back to notice a large group of walkers coming towards her
Madison: shit! Time to move Maddy
Madison starts to run in the other direction, she then notices a sign on a post. She looks and takes a breath
Madison: surely people will be there
-End Of Scene-
The camera pans back to the hotel where Sierra, Holdyn and Sue are all sitting in the foyer
Sierra: Sue no matter how much you look, your husband aint walking up to the door
Holdyn: Sierra really!
Sierra: what I'm just being realistic
Holdyn: no your being a bitch
Sierra: oh whatever, just wait until you die and I'm there still surviving
-Sue suddenly notices something outside-
Sue: guys there back
-Sue rushes to the door and opens it to let a male and female rush inside-
Sue: are you guys ok!
Henry: yeah we're fine
Sierra: you got the food cause I'm hungry
-Holdyn rolls his eyes at Sierra and walks up to Lucia-
Holdyn: are both of you ok, your not bite right
Lucia: nah we're both fine, we almost got bitten alive though
Holdyn: how?!
Henry: we were in the supermarket and got all the essential, then suddenly a load of walkers pours out of the back doors and almost got us but luckily the entrance was free of walkers
Lucia: it was still scary though, literally hated it
Sierra: oh well at least you got my food
-Sierra grabs the bags and takes it to the dining area-
Henry: Sue how has she been
Sue: she's been two remarks away from having a knife in the back
Henry: so she's been normal
Sue: yeah pretty much
Holdyn: well lets just need this food sorted before we find Sierra stealing more food for herself
-End Of Scene-
Madison continues running through the streets, she then trips on a pothole
Madison: ow fuck!
Suddenly a walker appears out of nowhere and tries to attack Madison, it grabs Madison and tries to bite her
Madison: no, no, no, not happening!
Madison kicks the walker in the face and tries to break free, the walker doesn't loosen it grip and goes it bite her leg, suddenly Madison grabs her knife and stabs the walker in the head just before it bites her. Madison lays there for a moment heavy breathing
Madison: Jesus Christ!
-she looks around seeing more walkers appear-
Madison: I need to get there now
Madison gets up and continues running towards her destination, in the distance behind her, the black figure stands back watching her leave whilst stabbing a walker that the eye.
Madison runs faster and faster as she gets to her destination, which turns out to be a school. She fast straight to the door and starts banging on it
Madison: hello! Anyone! Come on someone has to be here!
Suddenly a voice is heard
???: are you bitten?
Madison: no I'm not bitten, please just let me in
???: how can we trust you?
Madison: because I have been running away from loads of walkers who are about to kill me now
It goes silent, Madison notices and starts to panic. Suddenly the doors open and Madison sees the light from inside
Thoughts on the episode?
Thoughts on Sue and Sierra's friendship?
What do you think about all of the survivors at the hotel?
Thoughts on how Madison was defending herself?
Who is hiding in the school?
Who is the black figure that has been seen?
Who is your favourite character?
Who is your least favourite character?
Any opinions on how to make the series better? (I'm always open to critiques) #TheWalkingDead
Thoughts on the episode? I feel it was a bit on the short side, and I do wish more characters were introduced, but other than that, I see this series having some potential.
Thoughts on Sue and Sierra's friendship? I'm not sure how to feel about it, tbh
What do you think about all of the survivors at the hotel? Well, Sierra seems like a bitch, but the others seem decent enough.
Thoughts on how Madison was defending herself? In normal situations, Madison would have been bit. That was WAY too close for comfort!
Who is hiding in the school? Not sure. Could be anyone, really?
Who is the black figure that has been seen? I have a feeling this is Iris, but I'm not sure
Who is your favourite character? No one yet
Who is your least favourite character? Sierra lol She seems like a gigantic bitch
Any opinions on how to make the series better? (I'm always open to critiques) Try to make the episodes a bit longer, and try to include characters in any episode you can so everyone has a chance to develop.
Thoughts on the episode? It was good for the first episode! Can't wait until we delve deeper into people :)
Thoughts on Sue and Sierra's friendship? It doesn't feel like a friendship! Sierra is so sure :-/
What do you think about all of the survivors at the hotel? We haven't really gotten to know them yet, but Holdyn seems the nicest :)
Thoughts on how Madison was defending herself? I'm glad she got away, I wonder who she found.
Who is hiding in the school? I think Iris will be in there with a dew others
Who is the black figure that has been seen? Probably, someone, we won't meet this season, but they'll be a flashback character
Who is your favourite character? Holdyn for obvious reasons
Who is your least favourite character? Sierra kinda turns me off so far
Any opinions on how to make the series better? I would just try to make the episodes a tad longer is the only concern :)
Thoughts on the episode? - Good first episode! Obviously the groundwork is being laid for the future episodes and it's looking good so far!!
Thoughts on Sue and Sierra's friendship? - I think Sierra is too harsh on her, it's kinda like how I hated Shane in the early seasons of the actual TWD, however if he were still alive now I would probably like him more. Basically I really dislike Sierra so far, plus while Shane was kinda a bad guy for not so bad reasons, Sierra is basically just a meanie for no good reason. We'll see about them but I hope Sue puts her in her place. But I mean omg at the Shane/Sierra comparison like they're both cops too rofl
What do you think about all of the survivors at the hotel? I mean they all seem all right except Sierra. We'll see if my mind changes on any of them in the future.
Thoughts on how Madison was defending herself? - Tough Chick!!! Some intense fights but since she's a military official, she's probably better trained than the average fighters!
Who is hiding in the school? - I'm gonna guess Parker, maybe?
Who is the black figure that has been seen? - I think I agree with everyone else here that it's Iris. She would be the first person I'd assume.
Who is your favourite character? I think Madison made the best impression on me so far.
Who is your least favourite character? Sierra. But I'm not throwing her out yet as she has potential.
Any opinions on how to make the series better? (I'm always open to critiques) - I think you're doing a good job so far, since this is the first episode it's fine if it's short. If the rest of the episodes are short, just be sure like the others have said to make sure characters get developed properly.
Side note: I could see Sierra have a (Descendants Bailey) type arc where she becomes nicer along the way after someone close to her is maybe killed. _Ivyyy_445Icarus_Mark
Thoughts on the episode? A great start.
Thoughts on Sue and Sierra's friendship? I mean i really wouldnt call this a friendship.
What do you think about all of the survivors at the hotel? They're a strong bond.
Thoughts on how Madison was defending herself? I mean who wouldn't?
Who is hiding in the school? Tisha!!!!
Who is the black figure that has been seen? Someone we'll see later on.
Who is your favourite character? Madison
Who is your least favourite character? Sierra
Thoughts on the episode? I really interesting start. You have a great writing style, which I really enjoy!
Thoughts on Sue and Sierra's friendship? I am not really going to call it friendship :D I think Sierra is the bitch of the group, but Sue is trying to get to her heart
What do you think about all of the survivors at the hotel? I think that they are strong as a group, but expeditions like these (separated to the supermarket) are really dumb idea and if they continue to make that mistkae, someone is going to die
Thoughts on how Madison was defending herself? I am already inlove with her! You described her better than I imagined her. Great job!
Who is hiding in the school? I think it might be Tisha or Iris
Who is the black figure that has been seen? I am not sure yet, but I will make a guess - Buffy
Who is your favourite character? Madison, Sierra and Sue
Who is your least favourite character? I don't dislike anyone
Any opinions on how to make the series better? (I'm always open to critiques) I really think that you are doing great job for now and I am looking forward your story. I don't have any suggestions, I want to be a surprise from the author :)
