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"My Immortal" [Cover]

9thApr 9, 2018 by GrrrImABear
It's been a few weeks since my last cover, but I've been working and attending several auditions for colleges across the state, so I've been super busy.

A lot of the events happening today reminded me of the point in my life of when I was suffering through a lot of depression and I had a lot of really dark thoughts and was overall just at a really low point in my life.

This song has always meant a lot to me and it was a song that during that time I just connected to a lot emotionally and will probably always be really important to me.

As far as the vocals and piano goes, I'm always open to critiques and any feedback and responses you may have. I'm no Amy Lee, but I hope you still enjoy my cover of Evanescence's "My Immortal".



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Comments

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Sent by GrrrImABear,Apr 9, 2018
Awe great job I love it. So fitting for today too. ❤️❤️❤️
Sent by JustMe,Apr 9, 2018
amazing legendary iconic everything as always
Sent by peace123,Apr 9, 2018
amazing xxx
Sent by LivvieBoo12,Apr 9, 2018
OMG Patrick, you have a gift <3
Sent by Krisstea,Apr 10, 2018
Love it!
Sent by Mexus,Apr 10, 2018
Really good.
Sent by cswaggerr,Apr 10, 2018
<3
Sent by me2013,Apr 10, 2018
Nice man
Sent by Vlad21,Apr 10, 2018
Love this song <3 Great job! :D
Sent by dandoe,Apr 10, 2018
YES YES YES YES YES
Sent by Paige54,Apr 10, 2018
you have a great tone :)
Sent by k4r4k,Apr 10, 2018
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Sent by Sloth_Roman,Apr 10, 2018
I'll give critiques only because you requested them! Especially if you are auditioning for schools. I won't waste your time with telling you what was good, so I'll focus on what could use some work. First and foremost, the phrasing. Plan where you are going to take your breaths, because taking an audible breath always conveys some kind of emotion. Think about how you would speak the lyrics and convey that meaning through your phrasing. Your vibrato feels a little forced, and I think it is because you are choosing to use the hardest vowels. For example: all of meeeeeee, try lifting your soft palate and make the "ee" sound through an "ah" vowel if you understand what I mean by that! As for the piano, since you weren't confident in it and you know only the chords and I imagine not much music theory beyond that, I would stick to hiring accompanists or using instrumentals for any auditions (though I feel it's weird if they don't provide one for you). Really lovely voice though! grrrimabear
Sent by RawrItsNick,Apr 10, 2018
OH and watch the diction! Phrases like "pleasant dreams" were unclear and the consonants bleed into each other.
Sent by RawrItsNick,Apr 10, 2018
RawrItsNick thank you :)

I don’t do pop music in auditions but opera, arias, art songs, etc which I sing much differently from the pop stuff which is still new to me :) but thank you for your response, I have a lot of work to do in bringing in the techniques learned in the other style into over here without it sounding like I’m trying to sing opera if that makes sense haha
Sent by GrrrImABear,Apr 10, 2018
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Sent by JackEdgeAKAtheEdge,Apr 10, 2018
Nice
Sent by Akora,Apr 10, 2018
this is one of my favorite songs
Sent by ItsAustin,Apr 10, 2018
Amazing <333
Sent by s73100,Apr 10, 2018
Nice :)
But why tf am I on the continued list and not original list ???
Jk love u
Mean it <3
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